Love Now
- Green screen - film in drama studio instead, black and white at the start should carry on or be more dramatic when it changes, friends- its fun and its young, traffic time lapse - too long and irrelevant, its unique and prefer this one
- Much more creative, fun to watch
- Better story with good shots
- Flashing ticks were a bit too much, time lapse too long, use some different shots other than POV, use different frame shots and stabilize them and needs more lip syncing
- Too many shots in one place, could do with more close ups
- Looks more professional and add in lip syncing, too many black screens
- Needs more integrated singing shots and has good footage
- Love lip sync with the POV, locations make the POV really nice but needs more close ups
- Time lapse too long with not enough lip syncing
- Love the story but the car scene is too long and needs more of Lollie singing
- Can't read message on the phone and car section seems irrelevant
- Time lapse too long, lip syncing not in time but like the Go Pro idea.
No Pressure
- Needs lighting improvement
- Eye contact needs to be made more, too long shots, colour correct on the stool, not sure what else you could do, becomes boring
- Shots are on too long, needs more locations, dull
- Quite boring
- Love the black and white and Lollie looks pretty
- Some shots are too long, could have some sparks of colour, like the black and white shot on the chair and colouring needs looking at