Friday, 2 December 2016

Digipack Feedback.

Tori Lorente.
Really like the front cover, a really nice bold photo, it looks really professional. I like that the font is simple, but I think that instead of ‘Tori Lorente’ shouldn’t be in a bigger size font than ‘unseen’ I think it should be the other way round. I like that the before every song that is listed, there is a ‘T’ instead of like numbers or bullets. I like that you have kept the whole digipack black and white but I there isn’t any synergy between any of the photos, it isn’t very clear what kind of vibe you are giving your artist, like are you trying to make her edgy/cool or very clean and innocent?

Heidi Holmes.
I like the pastel colours that have been used throughout, it is very clear how you are trying to portray the artist, in a friendly way. I love the back cover where you have put the list of songs, I think the tree trunk looks really good, and I also like the fact you have included a barcode. I’m not sure if I think that when you look at it, it just seems too busy? There is quite a lot going on. The CD cover is nice. The photo with the boots isn’t very good quality compared to the other photos, and the writing on that page doesn’t fit the theme of the digipack. The font is too faint you can barely read it and where you have used pastel colours in the rest of your digipack it doesn’t suit.

AVA.
I love the first digipack with the red theme, this front cover is so good, looks really professional. I also think that the way you have displayed the songs is really original and looks really good he whole digipack is actually full of really good original ideas. I’m not too sure on the camouflage red part but the rest of it is really good. The yellow themed digipack is good but compared to the other one it makes your artist seem a lot younger and as if you are targeting a younger audience. I think that for the front cover you should do the exact same the red one in terms of where it says ‘AVA’ over the eyes but just don’t make it red if the problem is the colour not having synergy within the video. I like the idea or the different writing saying Ava that looks really good. I don’t like the upside down photos in the top left corner in comparison to the rest of the digipack it looks rushed.

Avenue.
I really like the top three pictures where the lyrics cover your faces as I like the black and white and then the bright colours on your faces as well.  There is a big difference between the top row of photos and the bottom row of faces, and it doesn’t match. The background on the bottom photos looks like flowers???  I think the text on the list of songs on the album should maybe be in a bolder colour so that it stands out more. The two different rows of the digipack look a completely different standard. I think the colour of the cd which is grey doesn’t go with the theme of the digipack or the yellow writing on the CD. The yellow writing on the CD should maybe be changed to either red, blue or green so that it matches with the rest of the digipack.

Iuris
I really like the whole theme of the digipack, there is clear synergy throughout the whole thing. It is very unique, and personal to your artist in terms of representing the video and the website which it really good. I really like all of the pictures you have used as none are in the same location yet they are similar because the artist is wearing the same clothes. I really like all of the writing around all of the images as I think it is very unique and different. The bottom left photo by the lake looks a different quality of photo to the others, maybe use a different one.

Annika
I like the colour scheme you have used however you need to add spines to your digipack because each section is blending together because the backgrounds are all dark. The photos are good quality and the artist looks appealing. On the image with black writing the word ‘stay’ is not clear and could be put in a more bold text to make it stand out more. The text on the songs is hard to read and should be bolder, it’s hard to judge it as a whole because not much has been done.

Ivory
The front cover photo is really nice, the artist looks really nice and it is appealing for a cover. The text on the front cover is really nice and suits the front cover without being too bold or too faint, it looks really nice. In comparison to the front cover and the rest of the pictures the CD is quite dull. The picture that is in the woods doesn’t really synergise with the rest of the digipack or your artist that we have seen in the video and on your website in terms of black and white and colour. I like the picture of your artist with the lipstick smudged as that shows synergy with the video. The writing for the list of songs could stand out a bit more if you made it bolder.

Luella
I like the red and black theme as this synergises with your music video and also your website. I also like how you have used the roses in your digipack, website and music video.  I think the CD picture and the picture of the red smoke are a bit too similar to be next to each other and should maybe be separated with another photo or something or edit one slightly to differentiate it more. I like how you have written the song titles as I think the white writing stands out from the red and black in the picture. The writing on the photo with the pond doesn’t stand out and is hard to read, in terms of the font and the colour, the font should be the same as the song titles is simpler and looks better. There needs to be something behind the CD cover because in all the other photos they are dark and then you have two photos on the top right that are very light and it’s quite random.

Stellato Star
I really like the front cover, I think the text is in a good place and it stand out also I like the colours used. The photo that you have used is really like and represents your artist well in terms of your website and music video. I also really like the picture you have used in the photo above the front cover and the way you have edited it. I like the picture you have used for behind the songs on the album but I think the red writing doesn’t really stand out from the picture so maybe you should put it in white or make it bolder so that it stands out more from the picture behind it. I like how you have done the CD. The black and white picture is a bit too similar to the front cover and also doesn’t make sense that it is in black and white considering the rest of the digipack is in colour? Maybe you should change it to colour or use a different photo so it isn’t too similar. I think that as a whole the digipack is good but it really dark and should maybe consider featuring some light images to brighten up the digipack.

Sempa
I like the editing used on the top left and bottom middle picture as it makes them different and unique. I like the picture on the top right as it goes well with the video but I think it could have some writing to something on it to make it a bit more interesting and eye-catching. I think the picture with the ‘keep clear’ sign is quite plain and maybe you should use the black and white for the front cover as it is the most interesting picture.